Microfiction Monday #51
Hootin’ Anni at Hootin’ Anni’s has started her treat fest for the month of October. Mahalo Hootin’ Anni. Much appreciated. Here is number 1 of 5.


Susan at Stony River Farm hosts Microfiction Monday. She posts a picture and you compose a story in 140 characters. You can click on the photo or link above to get further instructions. To help you along she has posted a wonderful link that counts your characters for you! How great is that! You can get the counter at Design 215. This meme is easy and it’s a blast. Mahalo Susan for hosting. This is great fun and I encourage everyone to participate.


Comments by ZingerBug.com
Hey, it’s only my opinion.
A Hui Hou






Please don’t tell me the horse is about to water the crowd?
roflmao!
Water? I’m confused.
Thom, you’ve never heard the expression “make water”? If you’re still confused consider this, would you want to spend much time below a flying horse?
Now i haven’t heard the term ever in my life. I’ve heard peeing or pissing but that’s about it LOL. I knew I’d get you to bite on this one LOL
That’s mysterious! Quilly (as usual!) made me laugh out loud – how perfect!
I did too, :}
Yeah she’s a real card alright.
Very hopeful and expectant! :O)
Let’s hope so
I love it and I suspect Quilly has got it right! What a hoot! A great one for the day, my friend!
Sylvia
Thank you and I don’t get Q’s comment LOL
Love the mystery in this one.
It all relates back to last week
Sounds like the beginning of a scifi thriller. My curiosity is piqued.
It ties in with last week as well
Gosh;
A mystery from Thom, love it.
If that horse sprays the crowd, I”ll probably wet my pant laughing!
I’ve added to the post LOL We shall see
Hhmmmm, grew up on Arabian nights. And can’t wait for the thriller conclusion.
Well you shall see next week.
Here Thom is trying to be all mysterious and romantic and you all disallow it! Oh wait . . . it’s Thom, never mind.
Thom, this is funny . . . I think . . .
LOL…Well part three airs next week
? Ah Sweet Mystery of Life …………? I think Quilly has it down as to what is going to happen. Nice one Thom.
Well if I understood Q’s comment I might be able to answer that but since I don’t get it I can’t
Sorry, Thom. I knew your posts were related. I never thought my silly comment would lead everyone off on a tangent! But hey, you’re the one who told me I was being too boring. Aren’t you glad I’m not now?
i never said you were boring. What I said was you do too many paid posts ROFLMAO!! Big difference. You boring…hardly. And look at the enthusiasm your silly little comment has done
This is the second week in a row you’ve hit a home run with your comments. Boring…pffft!!!
Love the mystery…just to note – flying horses are very discreet.
Flying horse stable owner
i’m glad you enjoyed and thanks for the note
I love this!
Many thanks my friend
We’ve flown full circle hopefully to the answer or the beginning of the answer for the two. Or is it the start of the answer.
thanks Thom – it’s so clear – stick with the horse
Isn’t it though
The circle closes next week
Like your fiction, Thom. The first reading I got Eyes wandered for Eyes wondered. It made a difference.
If this were a serial I would stay around for the next installment.
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I can see why you would but they eyes did wonder my friend. There is one more installment of this
and thank you.
Ooo…a mystery! I loved it.
Have a great week x
That it is. Glad you like it
Thanks!
Full of Eastern Promise! (as an old advert used to say!)
Nice words.
Hmmm interesting
Thanks
Nice teaser…now I’ll be wondering what the heck comes next! Mission accomplished.
Why thank you
I knew exactly what Quilly was thinking because I was thinking exactly the same thing! LOL
LOL…too funny
I was thinking something rather different! Anyway, I’m glad that joy will be unconfined.
Hmmm I wonder what you are thinking
“It was about to happen…” There is a delightful ambiguity here suggesting that the next step in the story could be negative or positive! But then there’s that smile…Lovely!
The smile is of things in the past
And yes it will happen
on my way to comment when i came across quilly’s and i started rolling. i forgot what i wanted to say- something about being spellbinding again. sorry but i must give it to quilly for dowsing that spell and giving this story a different twist. lmao!
ROFLMAO!!! Oh the beauty of leaving comments. I love it I’ve done the same thing you have
What a cliff hanger!
To be continued….
Thanks!!!
I’m sO glad you explained that! I was thinking this was a very VAGUE edition! Even with the explanation… I’m still thinking it a bit vague for you!
LOL Yeah it is purposely done like that my darlin’ Don’t wanna give away to much. It will all make sense next week. At least in my eyes it does
I’m interested to hear what happens next. Well done
Thank you my friend. Much appreciated
Hope it was a safe landing.
You and me both
Awesome. Now this is the kind of story where the horse is in the lead role.
LOL..well that’s one interpretation I suppose.
Thanks.
whew, mysterious, intriguing, philosophical all in one MFM who could as for more?
Thanks…indeed there is