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55 Flash Fiction Friday – 5/14/10

written by Thom - May 13th, 2010 at 10:05 pm

The voting is now open for Kailani’s May’s Photo Contest: Mother’s Day. The entries are all very good. Voting will be open from May 13th until midnight May 15th. If you have a chance please go pick your favorite photo for the contest and vote. Mahalo.

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Flash 55 is hosted by G-Man (Mr. Knowitall). Click the picture above or that link for more information. The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-Man know when you’ve posted your 55. Thanks G-Man for hosting.

PLEASE NOTE: THIS IS NOT FICTION

MY HE

My He taught me
Love
Friendship
Honor
Respect
Humor
Sadness
Camping
Hunting
Fishing
Driving
Humility
Gratitude
Happiness
Family
Courtesy
Caring
Manners
Sensibility
Responsibility
Servitude
Self Reliance
My He will be in my heart forever and ever. My He passed away 9 years ago today. My He, I miss you and love you. Rest in Peace!
Grandfather

GF, Ma and me

Have a sense filled 55 Friday

Hey, it’s only my opinion.

A Hui Hou

51 Responses to “55 Flash Fiction Friday – 5/14/10”

  1. Ohhhhhhhhh, sad but yet so touching Thom. With our loved ones, we continue to feel pain and loss even after years of their passing.

    Wonderful tribute!! Just wonderful.

    Thanks for stopping by just now, and leaving your comment…you always make my day!!!

    • Thank you my friend. I’m glad you enjoyed. Yours was wonderful as well. It is so true what you said and you to my friend, make my day!!! :)

  2. very wise 55,
    you see life as it is,
    full of wonders and emotions…

    thank you for the unique 55.
    Happy Friday!

  3. great tribute. we can learn so much from fathers and grnadfathers that take the time to teach us. nice 55.

    mine is up.

  4. So many beautiful lessons and so wonderfully remembered.

    I’m up at:
    Friday Flash 55 ~ Silvia’s Smile

  5. A great and touching tribute.

  6. What a beautiful tribute, Thom!
    Great 55!
    hugs
    shakira

  7. Thom, I love this. You have a poet in your soul who emerges when something or someone is truly important to you. That’s so much better than people who think they’re poets and write drivel about every idea that blows past their eyes.

    Well done – your grandfather would be proud of you.

    • Well thanks for the wonderful comment. I hope he is :) I guess like you say it has to be something important or someone. I truly thank you for this comment and your friendship. :)

  8. this was precious, words that come from the depths of sweet and sorrow. i love that you are continuing to carry him and his legacy with you in every step you take! a warm and lovely 55 today!

  9. Thom…
    This was your best 55 to date!
    I was raised by my Grandparents, and my Gramps taught me the very same values.
    I loved the pic…
    Thanks for sharing, thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, thanks for all of your support, and have a Kick Ass Week-End.
    Galen

  10. How good it is to have had such a wonderful grandfather. This is a great tribute Thom…

  11. Your He was a wonderful man who taught you many wonderful things… and I LOVE that! He certainly set an example that has helped to make you the man you are today – and for that I THANK him! I also thank MY He for giving you your life… and your heart! :) And may my He bless your He real good!

  12. This is just terrific. I love it!

  13. what a wonderful grandfather he was to all of us!!! i miss him so and waved to him this morning. GF I love you and miss you more than words can say sweet man. L

  14. Thom, how sweet that is!!! i love it and it makes me get tears in my eyes. i loved my Dad/your GF so very much and he was the dearest of men. in my whole life he was never mean to me – i cant believe its been 9 years and i miss him as much today as i did the first day he was gone. Thank you for always remembering. Love and Kisses, MA xoxoxoxoxoxxo

  15. This is such a wonderful tribute to a great man. You are very fortunate to have had him in your life and to have the memories. I think it’s safe to say that a part of him lives on in you.

  16. sweet and touching. your family does inspire you :)

  17. Enchanted Oak

    Thom, you were blessed by your grandfather, and you know it. Not everyone is allowed the opportunity. I was granted the gift, and I feel as fortunate as you.

  18. This is a beautiful tribute, Thom.

  19. I’m sorry you lost him, but he taught you well. :) I think he’d be proud to see the man you are today.

    Have a good weekend!

  20. Awesome tribute!

    I lived with my great grandfather until he passed when I was 12. I still miss him.

  21. I love the fact that you love so expansively and don’t mind sharing it. That speaks volumes of the people that raised you — your grandparents and your mother — and helps me to love them, too.

  22. A story in 55 words ! that sounds like stenographie and makes me think about work !

    You were very cute as a baby and I too had such a wonderful grandpa !

  23. Lovely tribute 55 to you grandfather Thom. I’m sure he’s watching over you. x

  24. Wonderful tribute to your grandfather!

  25. Touching tribute! Memories are something we will always possess!! And you can cherish these words forever, Nicely recalled!


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