55 Flash Fiction Friday – 3/5/10
Flash 55 is hosted by G-Man (Mr. Knowitall). Click the picture above or that link for more information. The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-Man know when you’ve posted your 55. Thanks G-Man for hosting.
THE VIEW
Her features were like none other.
Soft and Elegant.
Strong and Hard.
Her lines symmetrical to her curves.
Her curves highlighting the bold lines.
Her eyes glistening. Capturing her audience with her adoring stare.
She went by the name of Tahoe.
A beautiful Chevrolet.
Have a viewing 55 Friday
Hey, it’s only my opinion.
A Hui Hou
Now that’s one intriguing vehicle
Nicely done.
Thank you very much my friend. I thought so as well
exquisite poem . . . for a Tahoe. I think only a guy could write a love poem to a car, but I may be wrong! Even so, it is well done!
LOL Yeah I would think so. Glad you enjoyed this my friend
Perfect descriptions for such an odd vehicle. Wow, the things people can cook up with their home grown ingenuity, turning a cab into a animal drawn cart.
My 55 is The Schedule
LOL…the picture was just something funny to add in LOL. Didn’t match I know but I thought what the hell LOL. Glad you liked.
Are you car shopping? Or just admiring the view while you’re working? Men and cars…
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I’m always car shopping. I want a Hybrid Tahoe so bad I can’t see straight. But when it comes to the pocket book…well hence I write and dream LOL
smiles. tahoes are nice…i miss my xterra since the wreck…
ACK I didn’t know you had an accident. I’m sorry to hear that. I love the Tahoe
sorry, nice 55 as well. love the pic…that would be quite teh sight to see…
my 55 is up!
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. Wouldn’t it thought be a sight to see? LOL
Protection from the rain, no doubt. Fun photo and 55. My 55 is here .
Indeed my friend. Indeed
Poor beast. That must be heavier than pulling a regular wooden cart. But thank God you made creative fiction to go with it
Yeah the picture was just funny. That’s the only reason I added it. I wonder how much heavier than a wooden cart it really is? It’s just the frame it looks like to me
Oh yeah, you’re right, Thom it’s just the frame. But I still laugh everytime I remember it from among shots of a Mercedes Maybach where they tell readers to stop dreaming and get back to work, be thankful with what you got. And then comes that photo.
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RORFLMAO!! Too funny I can just picture it
too funny, yet vivid and realistic. i mean, would a woman write a love poem about a car? okay, maybe a few.
i’m still smiling,
Glad you enjoyed this. We both had a car theme I see
Yeah maybe a few would I think 
Was a Tahoe your first car Thom? I read some ‘love’ in your 55 words.
No it wasn’t but I sure do want it to be one soon. The Hybrid Tahoe
WOOT!!! If only 
Thom, I feel like I know you through Susan’s blog (the Susan at Stony River). Love your description of the car, and of course the photo. Nice!!
Here’s mine.
LOL Oh I give Susan a rash of shit all the time as you are aware but love her to death. Glad you enjoyed
Geez, This was about a CAR? I thought you were talking about the wonderful animal here. LOL
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LOL…had you going for a minute then. LOL. Thanks for stopping by
If that’s a Chevy, then I’m an International Harvester.
Good surprise end on your 55.
LOL..I love those as well. Perfect comment my friend
ROFL
Oh, that was so you.
Can’t imagine seeing that vehicle for the first time while on drugs of some kind. I’d think I was on another planet–
Uranus maybe.
Oh sister..with Hifu and Boobsquid diligently awaiting your arrival there drugs not needed ROFLMAO! Glad you enjoyed
ROFLMAO – when i saw the picture!
great 55 which i have a little trouble relating to (split infinitive intended)
LOL The picture is getting all the attention int his LOL Glad you enjoyed. Even with the split infinitive intended LOL
LOL! I love that Mexican SUV. Too funny. Have you driven a Chevy Tahoe? If I could get someone else to pay for the gas, I’d buy one. Oh wait. I might need someone else to make the payments, too!
I want they Hybrid Tahoe. When you find someone like that let me know. Maybe they can get two of them
Sometimes you write such “nice” or just interesting things…and then I get distracted by the pictures you come up with!!! Too much
LOL. I just thought I had to put some humor into this and it’s stolen the whole show LOL
That looks more like Toyota!
Excellent 55 Brotha.
Whimsy fits you quite well.
Thanks for the smile.
Thanks for playing today,
And have a Kick Ass Week-End…G
I don’t know how to do anything else. Glad you enjoyed
That’s the loveliest poem dedicated to a truck that I have ever read! I hope you two will be very happy!
If only I owned one LOL I want one real bad LOL
I can understand, a man thinking about a car in that way
LOL…me too
Here I am, picturing this magnificent women, when lo! The picture comes up! Too funny.
My post is up here.
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for stopping by